Hi robin, I can clearly see an improvement in design from the 1st poster to the second, however I think, according to Jon, sequential imagery is about "telling a story"
the three photos should read from left to right. while he stated in general to keep colors/effects/fonts the same for continuity
I don't think that includes content.
perhaps using the last image as a starting point you might want to go from the small to the larger picture.
for instance: 1) earth day 4/22/2012 mobilize the community! 2) earth day 4/22/2012 Mobilize the nation! 3)earth day 4/22/2012 Mobilize the earth!
Thanks Rico. After reading the email from Jon it makes more sense and I have to make a few changes. I think I misunderstood the concept, too bad I didn't wait until he sent the email but then again I needed to start somewhere. I appreciate your comments and hopefully I can make some good changes on what I have so far.
Although they are very nice, like posters!! The digital images are very good though. I love the first one and I love that you indicated alot of the color Green! Very clean!
I like your work, I thought I was doing my sequencing my adding to my original photo. I have to change mine too. Jon also advised me it is to tell a story. Good luck.
Hi robin,
ReplyDeleteI can clearly see an improvement in design from the 1st poster to the second, however I think, according to Jon, sequential imagery is about "telling a story"
the three photos should read from left to right.
while he stated in general to keep colors/effects/fonts the same for continuity
I don't think that includes content.
perhaps using the last image as a starting point you might want to go from the small to the larger picture.
for instance:
1) earth day 4/22/2012 mobilize the community!
2) earth day 4/22/2012 Mobilize the nation!
3)earth day 4/22/2012 Mobilize the earth!
and then use Jon's advice to unite the content
Thanks Rico. After reading the email from Jon it makes more sense and I have to make a few changes. I think I misunderstood the concept, too bad I didn't wait until he sent the email but then again I needed to start somewhere. I appreciate your comments and hopefully I can make some good changes on what I have so far.
ReplyDeleteAlthough they are very nice, like posters!! The digital images are very good though. I love the first one and I love that you indicated alot of the color Green! Very clean!
ReplyDeleteI like your work, I thought I was doing my sequencing my adding to my original photo. I have to change mine too. Jon also advised me it is to tell a story. Good luck.
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